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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby Lopdo » Thu Dec 13, 2012 12:06 am

yea, it was meant to say it was fairly new, young might not be the best word :)

Thanks for your kind words :)
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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby Vortex_Master » Thu Dec 13, 2012 1:04 am

Lopdo wrote:yea, it was meant to say it was fairly new, young might not be the best word :)

Thanks for your kind words :)

Ok, I was considering whether you ment new or not. It just didn't sound correct. Better words may have been current, recent, or modern. But I now understand what you meant. :)
I can't wait until your next short story.
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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby Ratburntro44 » Thu Dec 13, 2012 2:48 am

Lopdo wrote:Huge thanks to Joshua and Ratburntro for helping me finish the translation, anyone interested can find finished story here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Wq ... 3GAdc/edit

I wasn't actually done yet, but okay :)
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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby royalblue » Thu Dec 13, 2012 3:39 am

I think it's great. Good ending especially, well done.
I honestly don't remember why I decided to type everything in blue.
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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby Joshua » Thu Dec 13, 2012 5:32 pm

Ratburntro44 wrote:
Lopdo wrote:Huge thanks to Joshua and Ratburntro for helping me finish the translation, anyone interested can find finished story here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Wq ... 3GAdc/edit

I wasn't actually done yet, but okay :)

Lol. :)

What else were you gonna find to edit, seriously?
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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby Ratburntro44 » Thu Dec 13, 2012 11:13 pm

Joshua wrote:
Ratburntro44 wrote:
Lopdo wrote:Huge thanks to Joshua and Ratburntro for helping me finish the translation, anyone interested can find finished story here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Wq ... 3GAdc/edit

I wasn't actually done yet, but okay :)

Lol. :)

What else were you gonna find to edit, seriously?

I was going to look at the phrasing.
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