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Short story - Deja vu

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Re: meh...

Postby royalblue » Sat Dec 01, 2012 4:28 am

I can respect that. People used to call me Harry all the time, which irked me some. Though I know little about it, I think your name is nice.

But I respect your wishes, and so will stop. ;)
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Re: meh...

Postby calleharnemark » Sat Dec 01, 2012 9:58 am

Lopdo wrote:please don't use my real name, I don't like it (the name, not the usage)

Name change time? :D
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Re: meh...

Postby Lopdo » Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:51 am

Alright guys, I decided to do this. I got some positive feedback so it probably isn't as bad as I thought.
Here is the plan. I will make rough translation and then I will ask few of you to help me finish and polish it. I realize that reading incomplete translation will ruin reading experience a bit, so I want to limit number of people that will help to maybe 2 or 3. When we finish translation, I will share it with the rest. Any volunteers?
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Re: meh...

Postby Joshua » Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:57 am

Lopdo wrote:Any volunteers?

Sure.
Xerxes:Let us reason. It would be a waste. It would be madness for you and your troops to perish because of a misunderstanding. There is much our cultures could share.
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Re: meh...

Postby Ratburntro44 » Sat Dec 01, 2012 5:41 pm

Joshua wrote:
Lopdo wrote:Any volunteers?

Sure.

Count me in.
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Re: meh...

Postby dinomyte » Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:04 pm

Hey Lopdo you see I do many different matches but now my faves are gone. :(




:!: you are the only voulenteer to bring back those matches!
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Re: meh...

Postby Autumnwolf17 » Sun Dec 02, 2012 7:11 pm

I would help, but I'm a little busy at the moment. I'm quite eager to read it and I can help in a few days if still needed.
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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby Lopdo » Wed Dec 12, 2012 7:09 pm

Huge thanks to Joshua and Ratburntro for helping me finish the translation, anyone interested can find finished story here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Wq ... 3GAdc/edit
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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby Vortex_Master » Wed Dec 12, 2012 10:57 pm

Lopdo wrote:Huge thanks to Joshua and Ratburntro for helping me finish the translation, anyone interested can find finished story here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16Wq ... 3GAdc/edit

It is a really great story. I shared it with my friend and she loved it. One thing, do you think another word would be more appropraite than "young."
The opening seemed quite young, and, thank god, big enough for me.

•Maybe change it to, "The opening seemed quite small, but, thank god, big enough for me."
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Re: Short story - Deja vu

Postby Karen219 » Wed Dec 12, 2012 11:58 pm

Lopdo wrote:One thing, do you think another word would be more appropraite than "young."


I took that to mean, the opening was young, as in fairly new.

Also, great story. I enjoyed reading it.
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