Todays poem

[calleharnemark]

Today I saw a guinea pig.
He seemed so sure.
He was growing pretty big.
But he is really insecure.

He should care about his love.
He is hiding from her.
His admirers are flying like doves.
He think he got a good lure.

[calleharnemark]

You have lost.
Here is my newsfeed.
You were our host.
You can no longer control the creed.

You will go down
Fall to the stones.
Lose your crown.
Enemies burn your bones.

[calleharnemark]

I lost again.
Take the creed with you.
It's same now as then.
I hope they fall too.

Soon their time has come.
First the creed appeared to bloom.
It will be hard for some.
Now they meet their doom.

[calleharnemark]

They enter the creeds crematory.
They look at all numbers containing zeroes.
Now it will become a purgatory.
They burn living and dead heroes.

This is the fall of the creed.
No matter who they blames:
They lost indeed.
Now they die in the flames.

[Vortex_Master]

Calle, now instead of getting offended by every poem you write about the Creed, I just laugh. I laugh because your "omens" keep coming, and they keep getting more lame and more the same. "The End is nigh!" "The Creed will fall." "You are doomed!" Can you stop forcing rhymes about my clan and start making good poetry again? Most of your poems barely make any sense anymore, and they are all about the end of the Creed, which nobody wants to read.

[Fangfallen]

Calle, now instead of getting offended by every poem you write about the Creed, I just laugh. I laugh because your "omens" keep coming, and they keep getting more lame and more the same. "The End is nigh!" "The Creed will fall." "You are doomed!" Can you stop forcing rhymes about my clan and start making good poetry again? Most of your poems barely make any sense anymore, and they are all about the end of the Creed, which nobody wants to read.

His point is valid.

The Creed is unlikely to fall, in the case that they were going downhill they'd just kick whichever leader they had at the time out and use him as a scapegoat.
I for one do like the rhyme pattern you use in the death of the Creed poems you make.

[calleharnemark]

Calle, now instead of getting offended by every poem you write about the Creed, I just laugh. I laugh because your "omens" keep coming, and they keep getting more lame and more the same. "The End is nigh!" "The Creed will fall." "You are doomed!" Can you stop forcing rhymes about my clan and start making good poetry again? Most of your poems barely make any sense anymore, and they are all about the end of the Creed, which nobody wants to read.

Ok I will try then. Hmm.

[Vortex_Master]

Calle, now instead of getting offended by every poem you write about the Creed, I just laugh. I laugh because your "omens" keep coming, and they keep getting more lame and more the same. "The End is nigh!" "The Creed will fall." "You are doomed!" Can you stop forcing rhymes about my clan and start making good poetry again? Most of your poems barely make any sense anymore, and they are all about the end of the Creed, which nobody wants to read.

Ok I will try then. Hmm.

Thank you. And... I am sorry. That post came out more aggressively than intended. Your rhyming is good, the only reason I said nobody wants to read them was 1. because I don't want to, and 2. you have the word "Creed" in almost every one of them, which makes for the same word used to rhyme quite a bit, and it gets tiring. I mean that in the nicest way possible, Cate. I still like you.

[calleharnemark]

Calle, now instead of getting offended by every poem you write about the Creed, I just laugh. I laugh because your "omens" keep coming, and they keep getting more lame and more the same. "The End is nigh!" "The Creed will fall." "You are doomed!" Can you stop forcing rhymes about my clan and start making good poetry again? Most of your poems barely make any sense anymore, and they are all about the end of the Creed, which nobody wants to read.

Ok I will try then. Hmm.

Thank you. And... I am sorry. That post came out more aggressively than intended. Your rhyming is good, the only reason I said nobody wants to read them was 1. because I don't want to, and 2. you have the word "Creed" in almost every one of them, which makes for the same word used to rhyme quite a bit, and it gets tiring. I mean that in the nicest way possible, Cate. I still like you.

I will see what else I can come up with.

[calleharnemark]

I seek new ways.
I have to break this bad habit.
I don't have any delays.
It's not like am a hunted rabbit.

I will find a new theme.
To you all I have much respect.
I was stranded too along against the same stream.
Just let me know more of my flaws you detect.*

*Seriously. I mean that last sentence, I am not scared to be told what I am doing wrong.