Atlas {Part One}

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How is the story so far?

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I have some ideas that would make it better.
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You should stop writing dude.
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Re: Atlas {Part One}

Postby Fangfallen » Mon Jul 15, 2013 5:06 pm

Thank's Vortex. I just updated Chapter One. I'll add Chapter Two when I feel enlightened.
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Re: Atlas {Part One}

Postby Autumnwolf17 » Mon Jul 15, 2013 5:09 pm

I like it. Good job Fang!
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Re: Atlas {Part One}

Postby Fangfallen » Mon Jul 15, 2013 5:11 pm

Thanks man. I'm glad you think so. I'm taking up writing on the side. My hopes are that eventually I can publish a book. I'll need a lot of practice though and that's what this for.
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Re: Atlas {Part One}

Postby Fangfallen » Mon Jul 15, 2013 5:26 pm

Added first part of Chapter Two. I have a few twists I may add to the story but I think I'll save it for the end of Part 1. That way you'll HAVE to read Part 2.
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