Spelling and Grammar Mistakes

Posted:
Sat Aug 25, 2012 10:44 pm
by Joshua
Post here any spelling mistakes you find in the game (preferably with a screenshot) so that Lopdo can fix them.
Re: Spelling Mistakes

Posted:
Sat Aug 25, 2012 11:47 pm
by Ratburntro44
Chieftan achievement should be Chieftain.
Re: Spelling Mistakes

Posted:
Sun Aug 26, 2012 12:07 am
by Joshua
Snow Giants description should say "crush a head" instead of "crush head".
Legionaires description should say "these killing machines" instead of "those killing machine". Also "Legionaires" needs to be changed to "Legionnaires".
"Getting hang of it" achievement should be "Getting the hang of it".
Ninjas description needs a "The" at the start.
Angels description needs a "the" instead of "a" in between "make" and "world".
Terminators description needs "would" instead of "will".
Blade Masters description needs an "s" on the end of "blade".
"Symetries" map pack needs a double "m".
Deluxe Map Editor description (in shop) needs a "the" in between "get" and "following".
Re: Spelling Mistakes

Posted:
Sun Aug 26, 2012 12:10 am
by Ratburntro44
Joshua wrote:Also "Legionaires" needs to be changed to "Legionnaires".
No. That spelling mistake has been there so long it is an inside joke. You wouldn't want to kill an inside joke, would you?
Re: Spelling Mistakes

Posted:
Sun Aug 26, 2012 1:00 am
by Joshua
Ratburntro44 wrote:Joshua wrote:Also "Legionaires" needs to be changed to "Legionnaires".
No. That spelling mistake has been there so long it is an inside joke. You wouldn't want to kill an inside joke, would you?
More than I want to kill Norman for leaving us.
Re: Spelling Mistakes

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Sun Aug 26, 2012 2:21 am
by Joshua
In how to play, first page of basics, 2nd to last word says "regions's", should just be "region's".
Couple of apostrophes missing here and there, too many to name them all.
In how to play, 4th page of basics, before ""END TURN"", it should have a "the".
In how to play, 5th page of basics, between "determines" and "number" should be a "the".
In how to play, 5th page of basics, on the 4th line it says "cas", it should say "can".
Shouldn't there be a mod appointed to do this? I.E. Techgump?
Re: Spelling Mistakes

Posted:
Sun Aug 26, 2012 10:19 am
by Lopdo
Joshua wrote:Blade Masters description needs an "s" on the end of "blade".
you mean it should be "Their four hands, each wielding extremely sharp blades" ?
Each hand wields only one blade, you use plural even in this case?
Re: Spelling Mistakes

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Sun Aug 26, 2012 11:42 am
by Joshua
Lopdo wrote:Joshua wrote:Blade Masters description needs an "s" on the end of "blade".
you mean it should be "Their four hands, each wielding extremely sharp blades" ?
Each hand wields only one blade, you use plural even in this case?
2 sentences would make sense in this case; "Their four hands, each wielding extremely sharp blades" and "Their four hands, each wielding an extremely sharp blade". Come to think of it, the second would be better. Unfortunately it was 5 AM when I wrote this (No, I didn't get up early, I just went to bed late

) so my brain was fried xD
Re: Spelling Mistakes

Posted:
Sun Aug 26, 2012 11:02 pm
by Lopdo
Thanks, I fixed them all, they will be up in next update