Joshua wrote:Lopdo wrote:Joshua wrote:Blade Masters description needs an "s" on the end of "blade".
you mean it should be "Their four hands, each wielding extremely sharp blades" ?
Each hand wields only one blade, you use plural even in this case?
2 sentences would make sense in this case; "Their four hands, each wielding extremely sharp blades" and "Their four hands, each wielding an extremely sharp blade". Come to think of it, the second would be better. Unfortunately it was 5 AM when I wrote this (No, I didn't get up early, I just went to bed late ) so my brain was fried xD
And "make" them superiors fighters should be replaced with makes or rather making. Yeah making should be right.