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Re: Spelling Mistakes

Postby calleharnemark » Thu Jan 10, 2013 5:37 pm

Joshua wrote:
calleharnemark wrote:I got it "which makes them". that's the correct form. Joshua Is this britain or american cause i am Cambridge but speaks american/english. That would explain it.

There's no such language as American. There's a difference of like 10 words so it's not really worth it.

Anyways, 'Make' and 'Makes' both work, and with 'Making' you would have to change it to ', making'; with a comma. I say just leave it.

I meant american english and british english. Ok, have it your way.
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Re: Spelling Mistakes

Postby Ratburntro44 » Sun Jan 13, 2013 5:16 am

calleharnemark wrote:
Ratburntro44 wrote:Actually, the current form is correct in (as far as I know) every form of English.

I don't like it. It seems wrong and clumsy. How about a little more sophisticated?

Except it is correct and far more logical than "makes". Why the hell would you put an s on the third person plural form?
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Re: Spelling Mistakes

Postby calleharnemark » Sun Jan 13, 2013 8:27 am

Ratburntro44 wrote:
calleharnemark wrote:
Ratburntro44 wrote:Actually, the current form is correct in (as far as I know) every form of English.

I don't like it. It seems wrong and clumsy. How about a little more sophisticated?

Except it is correct and far more logical than "makes". Why the hell would you put an s on the third person plural form?

Oh. Sorry.
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Re: Spelling Mistakes

Postby calleharnemark » Sun Feb 17, 2013 12:06 am

Hmm noticed when you roll over boost and upgrade icon when boost and upgrades are disabled? Says bonuses and upgrades disabled. Should be upgrades and boosts disabled.
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Re: Spelling Mistakes

Postby Joshua » Sun Sep 01, 2013 3:04 pm

Achievements:
Learning the ropes - Should say "learn the basics" rather than just "learn basics".

Races:
Undead - Should say "The dead are" rather than just "Dead are".
Legionnaires - Should say "killing machines" rather than just "killing machine".
Arachnids - Take out the "can".

Miscellaneous:
Newsletter signup - Should say "The vortex wars" rather than just "vortex wars".

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Re: Spelling and Grammar Mistakes

Postby Fangfallen » Tue Sep 03, 2013 5:55 am

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Should say: Guests are not allowed to chat in the lobby, you can create an account for free.

You forgot a period and the "an" before "account".
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